Tuesday, 21 January 2014

LETTER OF A DYING SON(TO HIS MUM)

I went to a party Mom,

I remembered what you said.

U told me not to drink,

Mom,So I drank soda instead.

 

I really felt proud inside, Mom,

The way you said I would.

I didn't drink and drive, Mom,

Even though the others said I should.

 

I know I did the right thing, Mom,

I know you are always right.

Now the party is finally ending, Mom,

As everyone is driving out of sight.

 

As I got into my car, Mom,

I knew I'd get home in one piece.

Because of the way you raised me,

So responsible and sweet.

 

I started to drive away, Mom,

But as I pulled out into the road,

The other car didn't see me, Mom,

And hit me like a load.:(

 

As I lay there on the pavement, Mom,

I hear the policeman say,

"The other guy is drunk," Mom,

And now I'm the one who will pay.

 

I'm lying here dying, Mom....

I wish you'd get here soon.

How could this happen to me, Mom?

My life just burst like a balloon.

 

There is blood all around me, Mom,

And most of it is mine.

I hear the medic say, Mom,

I'll die in a short time.

 

I just wanted to tell you, Mom,

I swear I didn't drink.

It was the others, Mom.

The others didn't think.

 

He was probably at the same party as I.

The only difference is, he drank

And I will die.

Why do people drink, Mom?

It can ruin your whole life.

I'm feeling sharp pains now.

Pains just like a knife.

 

The guy who hit me is walking, Mom,

And I don't think it's fair.

I'm lying here dying

And all he can do is stare.

 

Tell my brother not to cry, Mom.

Tell Daddy to be brave.

And when I go to heaven, Mom,

Put "GOOD BOY " on my grave.

 

Someone should have told him, Mom,

Not to drink.

If only they had told him, Mom,

I would still be alive.

 

My breath is getting shorter, Mom.

I'm becoming very scared.

Please don't cry for me, Mom.

When I needed you, you were always there.

 

I have one last question, Mom.

Before I say good bye.

I didn't drink and drive,

So why am I the one to die?

 

N.B: decided to revisit this piece i put on facebook a while back, the message is still as strong as it was then, drinking alcohol clouds the sensesr brain, it also has ingredients that make you and dulls you get addicted... '...it is not for kings oh lemuel to drink wine..'

3 comments:

  1. Hmmmmmm

    Wat a touching Story

    A lot of times we pay for Sins commited by Others.........

    But Why is it so Mom????????

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  2. yes ooo, but if u read closely u will see he violated psalm 1. blessed is he that walketh not in the path of the ungodly, nor standeth in the way of sinners nor sitteth in the seat of the scornful...

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  3. But we've seen and heard of people who were not walking in d path of d ungodly nor standeth in d seat of d scornful, yet they pay for other peoples sin

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